In the past I have written blog posts with the theme of
“true confessions—I needed to make major changes on this book.” In a way, this
is one of those posts.
I, along with eight other authors, wrote and prepared for
publication our books in the Lockets
& Lace series scheduled to be released the last two weeks of
January, 2018. The December holiday season was a busy time for most of us,
myself included. Perhaps it was because I also wrote the prequel for this
series, but I found myself pushed for time to finish my full book for Lockets & Lace, Otto’s Offer. The main
plot I have had in mind to write for years. However, the fine details, like
some of my characters’ names, I did not choose until right down to the last
minute.
I needed my female protagonist (we used to just call that
person the heroine) to be hiding behind an assumed name. I considered some of
the more common surnames of English origin—Smith, Johnson, Jones and Brown—and
settled on Jones. I felt Smith was so common a surname, sometimes people in
certain circumstances using that surname can be suspect. At all costs, my
heroine, Libby, could not afford to be viewed as suspect. I chose the name
Jones, one I know is of Welsh origin and very common in the United States.
And, so, the process of getting our Lockets & Lace books
published and promoted progressed. We had cover reveals. We had preorders with
book descriptions. We offered snippets. The names of my main characters were
out there in public view.
I was almost finished writing this book when it hit me. I
have used the surname Jones before. I have used it not in just any book, but in
my Kizzie’s Kisses which was part of
the Grandma’s
Wedding Quilts series (GWQ), also by Sweet Americana Sweethearts authors.
Kizzie ended up married to Leander JONES. If that was not enough, Otto in my
current book is Kizzie’s cousin.
Next complication: the Sidney and Jemima Atwell children
belong to the GWQ series and Kizzie’s siblings belong to other authors. However,
the cousins, the children of Jefferson and Carlotte Atwell which I offered up
and no one seemed interested in, were solely my creation. Just as a couple
other GWQ authors wrote books that belonged to two series’—GWQ and one of their
own—I decided to do my own series, Atwell Kin, involving MY characters. Kizzie’s Kisses is book 2 in both
Grandma’s Wedding Quilts and Atwell Kin. Otto’s
Offer is book 3 in both Lockets & Lace and Atwell Kin. (And,
yes, I have started the prequel, book 0, Charlie’s
Choice and have planned book 1, Virginia’s
Vocation.)
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| How could I have done that? |
All well and good, except I managed to write myself in a
corner by coming up with two totally unrelated characters in two separate
books, both having the surname of Jones.
Not good.
Somewhere from the time I was young I was taught if I was
handed a lemon to make lemonade. Take something that was sour and inedible, and
sweeten it up until it is a tasty treat. A few rewrites later, that is exactly
what I did with the surname Jones in Otto’s book. I added a chapter with
details that had not been part of my original plot. I reintroduced one of my
favorite secondary characters from Kizzie’s
Kisses. I used it to solidify the growing relationship between
Libby Jones and the Atwell family and their connected kin.
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| All's well that ends well, right? |
How did I do it exactly? Since revealing the details would
be big spoilers for both Kizzie’s
Kisses and Otto’s Offer for those who have
not read either or one of those two books, I won’t say exactly how I wrote it.
All I will say is this: once Libby realized the misunderstanding regarding the
name of Jones she had assumed as an alias, she tendered this thought:
I
should have chosen the last name Smith.
That was actually my
thought until I found a way to take that writing lemon of my own doing, and I turned
it into what I felt was some excellent storyline lemonade.
Zina Abbott wrote for both the Grandma’s Wedding Quilts
series and the Lockets & Lace series.
To find the book description and purchase link for Kizzie’s Kisses, please CLICK HERE.
To find the book description and purchase link for Otto’s Offer, please CLICK HERE.















